User:CupcakePelle/TGT over analyzed/tails gets trolled (Chapter 1)

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• The name of Chapter 1 is just 'tails gets trolled'. There is no 'chapter 1'.
  • This had let me believe (and I know that is this false) that it's like Twilight, asin the first chapter is called 'tails gets trolled' (and also the whole franchise), while the other chapters are call there chapter names, e.g. Chapter 2 is called 'trolls attack', etc.
• This is the first chapter where the cover came out after the first page. (The only other chapter to do this is Chapter 25, if you count the pont pages)
• The way Mario's eyes are drawn, it makes it look like he's cross eyed. I dunno, it looks kinda funny.
• Pori and Alex's mouth does not align, and it has been bothering me since I first look at that cover!
• Knuckles is in a very weird position, he's infront of Shadow, but at the same time not?
• It looks like Pori's sword is Silver’s arm.
• On the upper-left side of Mario's cap, and on Silver's right arm, there's a gray triangle, and I don't know what it is.

Page 1

I’m just gonna cover this now so I don’t have to repeat myself (unless it's something that should be pointed out.):
1. The grammar.

It is… How do I put this in a nice way? Less than even how Boomers think Zoomers write. There’s general stuff, like, no capital letter at the beginning of a sentence, how there are no commas, or no periods, no apostrophe where this is a contraction. But, having a space before a period and starting a sentence with a period, or having a space after and before a sentence. Just, wow!

Another thing is the chance of if a word is bold or not, like on panel 4. Or, the question mark be slightly lower than the “there” on the previous word on panel 5. This isn’t Lazerbot being oppstrict, this is just MS Paint being bad.

When you use the text tool in MS Paint you can write whatever you want. Although, if your text goes too close to the bottom of the box that you are writing in, the text will be cut off. This example does not appear on this page, but it does in later pages, like page 7, panel 10. However, on an unrelated note when you stop using the text tool, either by clicking off the text box or switching to another tool, the text gets imprinted onto the images. So, if there is a grammar mistake in your text or you accidently click off the text but, you have 2 options 1) to CTRL+Z and retype the text or, 2) (do what Lazerbot probably did,) remove the mistake and retype the text.

2. The art.

Now, I know art is subjective, but hear me out. If we purely judge TGT’s art objectively, then it breaks all the rules: In consistency, perceptive, the shading (for this chapter and the early chapters), etc. Probably the one objectively good thing about TGT’s art is the colors, the colors aren’t matched together and it makes it look like an LSD trip.

If we get more character sentence on the art, then lets talk about Tails:

• Tails

Not only is he drawn with three tails instead of two in this chapter, his eyes are drawn human-like. Most Sonic characters have their eyes connected to the muscle, but Tails’s eyes are most of the time not connected to his muscle, and it looks weird. Here’s a list where Tails’s eyes are drawn weirdly:

1. Page 1

Panel 4

Panel 5

Panel 9

Panel 11

1. Page 9

Panel 6

1. Page 10

Panel 1

1. Page 19

Panel 5

Panel 1

• Tails has 3 tails indeed of 2, this will be a thing for the whole chapter.

Tailslololololol

• This has two implications,

1. Tails is laughing
2. Tails is just saying “lololololol”